Okay, confession time, sometimes I write and write and write. When I stop writing, I read and say, “This sucks!”
The problem was it just didn’t go anywhere.
Has this ever happened to you?
No, I didn’t think so.
Well, if it ever does, here’s an excellent blog http://www.writesex.net/?p=201&cpage=1#comment-1408
Remember: incident, conflict, confrontation = story